I have just read over your article, and there are several errors. I think that puntuation, spell check, and paragraphing is a must. I would really like to know where you got the article, so a hyperlink might be nice. Also, where did you get all the statistics?
I just found your article, and you only changed a few words, from the person who actually wrote the article. This is plagiarism. That is a crime.
http://articles.latimes.com/2002/mar/29/news/mn-35312
Tuesday, May 5, 2009
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